Positives
- I think the essay was very good overall and clearly a lot of effort went into it judging by how long it was.
- Good range of theorists used.
- Good use of quotation in reference to Todorov's theory.
- Impressive linguistic skills and explanation of points.
- Great use of examples.
Negatives
- "I am certainly pleased with the final product and it could not have been achieved without Khushel or me and our own creative decisions and knowledge of real media texts fitting the genre of R&B." you mean "Yasmin or me" right?...
- Slightly random structure.
I think this is a top band answer and one which Khushel can be very proud of. Goodnight, and stay safe.
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